Dr. Jamie Bondage

This was amazing! I only saw one mistake. His love still knew That if her left He would come undone This either needs to be "That if she left" or ...

Tristan: I growled. "and I've seen you sleep with other guys. I wonder which one's worse!" I glared. "I refuse to marry you. Now, GET OUT OF MY SIGHT!" I ...

Hey! Welcome to YWS! What do you write? I hope you really like it! My name is Jamie. if you have any questions, feel free to pm me! Jamie

Brian: I walked over to Chels, putting on a fake smile. "Hey gorgeous. who's your friend?" I asked, trying not to be jealous. I sighed. I didn't even deserve her. ...

Triston: I growled. "No, Ashley. I'm not going to marry you! I love Lilith! I don't care! I love her and Grace. I refuse, Ashley."

Brian: I groaned. this was rediculous. I was upset over a stupid girl. I growled and headed to the party alone, my sis too involved with her horse. I looked ...

Tristan: I growled and pulled away. "Ashley, i'm bound here. The Fairies are keeping us. Plus..." I bit my lip trying to think how to broach the subject delicately. I ...

Beth: I laughed and blushed at the cowboy. "You have an accent." I said, then turned redder. "Sorry. That was rude of me." Brian: I sighed and decided to text ...

First: Capatalize the first word of the lines. shes looks outside her window, hoping to the sun again. (This doesn't make sense to me. Plus, capitalize "shes" and add an ...

Tristan: I pulled away. "Ash-Ashley. What are you doing here?!" I demanded, glancing at Lilith worridly. I growled. This would happen!

Name: Cara Age: 17 Personality: She's sweet and kind. she's very na

Hey! Welcome to YWS! What do you enjoy writing? I'm Jamie, and I thought I would welcome you. XD Hope you love this site! Lol. If you have any questions, ...

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It was really good! Read back through for capalization errors. There were several. But I really like it. It was very moving. XD Hope this helped! Jamie

It was really good! Read back through for capalization errors. There were several. But I really like it. It was very moving. XD Hope this helped! Jamie